i'd suggest using a font cause i can barely understand what you write. people shouldnt spend time trying to figure that out.
I'd suggest reviewing your reviewing skills because I can barely understand how that single 'problem' warrants zero stars.
Also, be thankfull THIS isn't my handwriting:
you need to learn more anatomy and how to paint shapes.
the white stuff on the sides is horrible. never go for full white, especially if the illustration is really colorful.
red with cyan dont mix well. especially if they are both really saturated. learn some color theory. colors alone can imporve something a lot.
well and now tell me who asked bout ur oppinion?im sadisfied with the result so is the person it was for lol i also did not ask for any critic so thx dude i dun give a shit^^
pretty much nothing good going for it.
there isnt enough detail or expression to justify it being a close up.
there isnt much of a composition since there isnt much in the first place.
technique and design is lacking heavily.
if i didnt read the title i woulnt have any clue what this was suppose to mean, and i still dont know really.
you should start improving your basic drawing skills before trying to do finished work. you can never be too good at the basics and you really need to learn the basics.
if you really want to get better go watch some tutorials and practice the same things every day untill you can do them really fast!
Why waste your time commenting though? in any case thank you for the review.
way too much details in the background. it subtracts attention from the character.
interesting composition, but lacks in depth, values and details, with no clear focus point
i'm digging the art style, but the composition and cluttered details make it very hard to read.
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